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Part One · Chapters 1–8

Bramble Warren

Thirty rabbits live under an old hawthorn in a meadow, in chalk tunnels their families have dug for generations.

Every morning Fern goes up first. This morning, you go down.

The count: 30 asleep in the warren

This was the moment. The threshold between safety and exposure, between the known dark and the unknown light.

The tunnel to the main entrance

Whiskers for the dark

Fern descended. The tunnel to the main entrance was memorised in her muscles.

Fern runs this tunnel every morning, without sight.

Her whiskers mapped the walls, confirming distances.

A cutaway of chalk earth under the meadow: one narrow rabbit tunnel winds down from a grey dawn opening, under a low hawthorn root and past a thin drainage channel.
Move a pointer or a finger through the dark, or focus the tunnel and use ← and →. Let your whiskers find the way. The tunnel in section: chalk above and below, roots through the ceiling, and the three things Fern’s body remembers.

What the whiskers find

  • stepping over the drainage channel that carried rainwater away from the sleeping chambers
  • ducking beneath the low spot where a root crossed the ceiling at ear-height
  • following the slight leftward curve
  • Nothing yet. It is very dark.

The storyteller who embroiders

Bracken’s chamber

Bracken, a big warm-brown buck, lies at ease in a glowing earthen chamber while young rabbits crowd in to listen. The same chamber: Bracken sits up and the young rabbits turn towards the bright opening, where Fern has appeared.

Fern’s brother is broad in the shoulder and never short of an audience. This morning: the yearlings, and a stoat.

His voice reached her before she reached him, resonant with the particular warmth that meant he was performing.

Bracken’s version

“… I could smell its breath. And I have to tell you, as breath goes, truly horrific. …”

Fern’s version

  • “You didn’t outrun a stoat, Bracken.”
  • “You hid behind a stone wall and it lost interest,” Fern said.

The yearlings deflated visibly ⁠— ears softening, bodies settling from the forward lean of rapt attention into the slump of anticlimax.

  • “I was getting to that part.”
  • “That’s the only part.”

Fern moves on. Bracken’s voice follows her down the passage, for the yearlings alone:

“She was there, but she was hiding behind a different stone wall, so her perspective is ⁠— at best ⁠— partial.”

The mapmaker

Nettle’s tunnel

Nettle’s chalk map scratched into a tunnel wall, chalk flakes on the floor.

A dead-end branch off the main passage, so narrow that a larger rabbit might struggle to turn round in it. By design.

Nettle had chosen it for its privacy and its chalk ⁠— the walls here were smooth and pale, ideal for scratching.

He maps everything: routes, exits, dangers, the whole western range of the warren, in marks only he can read. Scratch the chalk and see.

A smooth, pale chalk wall, evenly lit and ready for scratching.
Nettle’s wall Press and drag across the chalk to scratch it, with a pointer or a finger. Point at a mark you have uncovered, or focus it, to read it.
Water
Routes to water sources, marked with a symbol that looked like three rippling lines.
Bolt holes
Bolt holes, marked with a circle.
Predator country
Predator territories ⁠— fox runs, badger setts ⁠— marked with angular slashes.
West
An arrow pointing west. Beside it, symbols: water. Ridge. Distance unknown. He added it the night Thistle told her story.

That night he gave Fern a look that said:

I’m mapping, not believing. There’s a difference.

The keeper of the old songs

Thistle’s chamber

The deepest chamber is the oldest part of the warren, its ceiling held up by hawthorn roots as thick as a rabbit. Thistle is small and grey, white about the muzzle, and she misses nothing.

Singing, low and rhythmic, in a cadence that rose and fell like breathing.

Roots and earth below the hawthorn, rising towards the light at the surface.
The founding song
  1. Long Ear found the meadow
  2. when the grass was taller than the sky,
  3. and she dug with her claws
  4. and she dug with her heart
  5. and she said: this is where we will not die.

The song was beautiful. It was also, Fern suspected, largely untrue. But untrue and useless were not the same thing, and she had never said so to Thistle. The song held them together. That was enough.

The heart of the warren

The main hall

The warren’s main hall: a shaft of daylight falls on Elder Moss, an old grizzled buck with half-closed eyes, while Fern, a slim brown doe, faces him in greeting.

Three tunnels meet here, and the whole warren fits inside. One shaft runs up to the meadow:

… allowing a thread of daylight to enter and touch the chamber floor like a finger pointing downward.

Elder Moss sat beneath that finger of light.

Their exchange was ritual ⁠— unchanged for as long as she had been scout.

  • “Safe morning?”
  • “Safe morning, Elder.”
Carved rabbit medallion (project emblem) half-buried among roots and leaf litter.

That evening, in the main hall

King Root, told

“Before the stone walls,” Thistle said.

“Before the metal roads. Before the lights that never go out.”

There was a rabbit called King Root. …

He walked west. For seven days and seven nights.

  1. The first trial

    The river

    Past the river that drowns ⁠— where the water runs so fast that even stones cannot stand.

  2. The second trial

    The forest

    Past the forest that swallows ⁠— where the trees grow so thick that daylight cannot enter.

  3. The third trial

    The hill

    Past the hill that watches ⁠— where the slopes have eyes and the earth remembers everything that passes over it.

And on the seventh night, he found a hill of white chalk. The hill was honeycombed with tunnels that glowed with their own light ⁠— green and soft, like moonlight trapped in stone.

“And he said to all the rabbits of the earth: come. Come to Briar Hill. Where no rabbit ever has to run.”

Thirty rabbits, warm and safe and whole, sleeping in the earth.

A pebble rolling across the earth floor of a tunnel, trailing dust, in faint amber light.

The tremor

Then she felt it. Not a sound. A vibration ⁠— deep, subsonic, felt in the belly and the jawbone rather than heard through the ears.

Dust drifted from the ceiling.

It comes again, deeper. She runs the dark tunnels by memory and whisker, up into the night.

The Bramble Warren meadow at night: the hawthorn and the waiting machines under the stars.

That night

The flags

The stars were bright ⁠— countless pinpricks in a clear sky, the Milky Way a pale river overhead.

Not stars.

Hard white light, blazing from tall poles, cutting into the darkness with the sharp edges of human manufacture.

In that cold light, shapes. The silhouette of heavy machinery: a bulldozer, its blade raised like a jaw frozen mid-bite.

The lights were not for working ⁠— they were for watching.

An orange surveyor’s flag planted in the meadow at night, floodlights in the mist.

Flags.

Orange plastic flags on thin wire stakes.

Dozens of them. Rows of them. Neat geometric lines marching across the meadow with the precision of something measured and deliberate.

Orange marker flags on thin wire stakes, a row of them running through floodlit night grass.

The lines followed the warren’s shape.

The warren in cross-section on a spring night: glowing burrows and chambers under the meadow, a passage climbing to a hawthorn in blossom on the right. A line of orange survey flags stands in the meadow, each one directly above a place in the warren below it: the entrance, the tunnel, Bracken’s chamber, Nettle’s tunnel, Thistle’s chamber and the main hall with its shaft of light. A dashed orange survey line runs through the earth in the warren’s own shape.

The warren in section, every burrow lit, and the same shape drawn again by a machine: flags over the entrance, the tunnel, Bracken’s chamber, Nettle’s tunnel, Thistle’s chamber and the main hall. Every place you have just walked through.

They had found it without entering it, mapped it without digging.

Grey and thin

Morning

The flags that had been dozens were now hundreds.

The meadow at dawn staked out with rows of small orange flags, three yellow bulldozers waiting at its edge.
A surveyor flag spiked beside the Southern Bolt Hole, seen from inside the burrow.

The southern bolt hole comes up under a blackthorn thicket, south of the main entrance.

It was their emergency exit ⁠— the tunnel that existed for the day everything else failed.

A flag stood directly above it. Bright orange. Motionless in the still air.

Nettle has been out every night this week, checking. Fern asks if he can copy his map, or carry it somehow.

“No. It’s in the wall. When the wall goes, it goes.”

He looked at her. Tapped his head with one forepaw.

“But I have it all up here. I always have.”

Nettle’s chalk map scratched into a tunnel wall, chalk flakes on the floor.
A lone hawthorn silhouetted against a red sunset over the meadow grass.

Under the hawthorn

The last evening

The final evening of the warren came dressed in extraordinary beauty, as if the world were offering compensation for what was about to be taken.

The western hills rolled away before them, green and gold and endless, disappearing into the distance where the light was so thick it became haze.

The hawthorn stood alone against the darkening sky, ancient and patient, its roots reaching down into the earth where thirty sleeping rabbits breathed as one.

The construction lights came on.

A bulldozer ripping up the meadow turf with chalk showing beneath, exhaust smoke rising, low sun on the left.

Chapter 8 · The destruction

The sound came first.

Fern sends them out through the eastern tunnel and comes out last. In the bramble at the field’s edge she turns, and counts.

The count: 14

“Fourteen.”

Thirty had slept in the warren last night.

The ground sinks where the main hall was.

Where Elder Moss had sat beneath the shaft of light and said safe morning.

Thistle began to hum. Very quiet. Very steady. Not a story ⁠— just the melody. The founding song.

“West,” she said.

Part One ends here.